If you prefer to read a story broken up by part by part, then please see my posting on the stories board of Smoke Signals. (same story, just broken up into individual parts)

I would appreciate any feedback from my fellow smokers. (since I'm practicing my story writing for school) I love writing stories about smoking and sports-basketball in particular. My professor at school refuses to see any of my pro-smoking stories (he's obviously an anti), but he does love my basketball story. ("The Mighty Flames", as Karen knows)

Anyway, even if the feedback is negative, I don't mind hearing it.

If you want to talk to me via email, no problem. But I prefer seeing it on this board.